Home when you are studying there and home when you are relaxing there- international student perspective.1- 4-5 pages Revision for an A level.
2- Comparison and contrast essay in the attachment.
3- I want you to be focus on using grammar and punctuation correctly.
4- Use the correct way of MLA.
5- In the attached essay, the thesis statement is off topic so you better make this as a thesis statement, “Home when you are studying there and home when you are relaxing there.”
6 -Description below and do not forget to look at the attachment:
“Write an essay in which you use the comparison or contrast method to relate your observations of a particular place or person from two perspectives.
For example: one may wish to relate one’s observations of a place (i.e. a favorite hideout, a particular spot along the river, or another place worthy of discussion) from one’s perspective as a child as compared to that of an adult.
One might relate one’s perspective of the ocean as it looks (feels, smells, sounds) from the beach and as it looks (feels, smells, tastes, sounds) from in the water.
One might wish to describe a person before knowing him or her and after knowing him or her.
Remember: The point of the essay should not be simply to say two things are similar or two things are different; the point of comparing or contrasting two perspectives is to say something about them. So write down, and keep in mind, not only a particular audience for your essay but also a particular purpose for making the comparison.”